2014-2015
Champion Jermaine 1A
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? Look at the cat kick the dog. The cat is mean. Look, the dog hurt its face. That really hurts! Wow! The cat has scary eyes. Look at the dog’s saliva come out, yuck! Why are they fighting! I don’t want to do that. They are not respecting. The dog is weak. That cat is strong. I know why the cat is strong, maybe the dog is old. “Stop cat! That is not respecting. I hate cats when they are fighting!” The dog respects the cat.
1st Runner-up Crisha 1C
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? Mau Mau is riding on Wo Wo’s back. Wo Wo is running. Mau Mau is white and black. Wo Wo is brown and light brown. Mau Mau has a small nose and two small eyes. Mau Mau is making funny action. They are funny! Wo Wo is putting his tongue out. They are playing in the corridor. Mau Mau is kicking Wo Wo. They are putting make up. I can’t stop laughing because they look like a clown. I like Mau Mau and Wo Wo because they are cute. They make funny face like a monkey. I love them so so much. I want to kiss them. They are so cute. I like their colour.
2nd Runner-up Malaya 1B
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? They are running in the kitchen in the afternoon. They are running because Mau Mau feels bored. So Wo Wo and Mau Mau played a race together. Then Mau Mau was cheating and drank Coco-cola. But then his tummy feels bad. Wo Wo is angry. She said,” If you cheat again, I will hit you.”
Champion Lavon Chan 2A
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? Today Mau Mau and Wo Wo are thinking what they are doing. Mau Mau wants to do silly things but Wo Wo wants to play funny games. So then, they are angry to each other. Just when they are fighting, their owner comes in. The owner is angry of them because they must be friends, but friends don’t fight like that. So she says,’Mau Mau and Wo Wo, please don’t fight. You guys are friends. How about let’s do something more fun. OK?’ So Mau Mau and Wo Wo finally understand. And then they say,”Let’s play other game more fun. We promise we won’t fight again, please forgive us.’ So their owner says,’It’s ok!’ At last, they never fight again.
1st Runner-up Gurrajpreet 2B
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? They are fighting. They are gonna get hurt because Wo Wo stole Mau Mau’s corn. And then Mau Mau kicked Wo Wo’s face. They had a big fight.Wo Wo bit Mau Mau’s tail. Mau Mau punched Wo Wo’s face. Then their owner came and said, ‘Stop it you two.’ They said, ‘Sorry!’
2nd Runner-up Niraj 2C
Cat and Dog
Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are good friends. Sometimes they do silly things and play funny games. What are they doing now? One time Mau Mau the cat and Wo Wo the dog are playing hide and seek. Mau Mau accidently kicked Wo Wo in the face, then Wo Wo fought again and Mau Mau worea batman mask. Wo Wo put on white eyes and Mau Mau also put on white eyes. Wo Wo is hurt. Mau Mau’s skin colour is black and white too.When Mau Mau kicked the dog in the face, Wo Wo spit out germs. Now Wo Wo and Mau Mau are friends forever again and they won’t fight again.
Champion P.3B Anagha
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late! Mr Ryan, please don’t go to the beach tomorrow! You have a five percent chance of living and ninety-five percent chance of being eaten alive by a shark! Every beach in Hong Kong happens to be full of shark infested waters. Now I will tell you how it started. Last Winter was so cold that every part of the south and north poles began to freeze, including the sea! So all the sharks went to different places and most of them came to Hong Kong! How do I know this? Well, once a man was swimming but suddenly he dove in but didn’t come back. Suddenly, some people saw his head floating in the sea! So please don’t go!
1st Runner-up P.3A Augustus
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late! Mr Ryan, don’t go swimming! Or you will be captured by Jaws. Today jaws are hiding in the reef.He is capturing anything that moves and eats it! If you go swimming, jaws will mistake you for a seal. Jaws don’t like to eat humans because we have so many bones. But seatls are big, fat and don’t havemany bones. You can’t out swim him because he is a Great Whit Shark. He is smart and has teeth like knives. He is as big as a ferry. He can also sneak on you because his is camoflaged in the water. Please don’t go swimming! “AAAggghhh!” Mr Ryan starts screaming and doesn’t stop until he reaches his house.
2nd Runner-up P.3B Angelo
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late!
Dear Mr Ryan,
Don’t go to the beach tomorrow! There’s a shark. Wait! Let’s start when it began. I was watching the news when they told there was a shark that broke into the net! None of them were injured, but it went to the other side of the net until we found out the shark had brought more sharks! The reporter said that we cannot go to any beaches because they are everywhere! Even when you are high up in the sand. They said there were sand sharks! But if I were you, I would go to the swimming pool instead! That is everyone’s warning! So, spread the news! Oh I forgot to tell you that Tom ignired the message and went to the beach which he was eaten by the sharks! So watch out!
From,
Angelo
Champion Georgette P.4B
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late! Mr Ryan, you are in danger! When you go swimming tomorrow at the beach, a shark will attack you and eat you! Don’t go to the beach. Just go to a resort instead. I will pay for you. I know what will happen because I have a third eye!
I will find a resort that has a beach with no sharks in it. But just remember, don’t go to the beach. If you want to go swimming, go to a swimming pool. Or go to Disneyland resort! Or spend your day in Ocean Park with your girlfriend.
1st Runner-up P.4B Walida
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late!
Oh ho! Mr Ryan. Do you know the future of yourself? If you don’t, let me tell you. When you go to the beach, you will see a shark there. The shark will run after you. I’m warning you when you see the shark, you should stay relax. When it eats you, you will go to its tummy. You should better bring a camera with yourself. So when you get in its tummy, you should better take photos of the shark’s stomach. After taking photos, get out from its mouth. Then swim back to the beach and go to the science club. You should show them the photos and they will be surprised. You will be in the newspaper and you will get FAMOUS too.
2nd Runner-up P.4B Nicky
Shark
Mr Ryan will go swimming at the beach tomorrow. However, he doesn’t know that something bad is going to happen. You have to warn him before it’s too late! Mr Ryan, this beach is famous for the sharks. They will kill you at anytime they want! They’ll bite you first, then they drag you back to their home! It’s so scary! But the scariest thing is …They will eat you! Not only a shark, but hundreds of sharks will eat you! I watch some videos, they munch you and you will be gone forever! Because these kinds of sharks are different, after you reach their tummy, you will be dissolved! I hope this won’t happen to you. Your family will be sad if you got eaten. The sharks can poop. So you will into poop if they eat you. Yuck!
Champion Saahil 5B
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly a grizzly bear came out of nowhere. It was huge and really hungry. When Mark, the cameraman, saw the grizzly bear, he shouted really loud. Everyone was scared to death. They started running as fast as a bullet. Unfortunately, Mark fell down really hard on his back. All his friends were selfish, they didn’t help Mark. He was really disappointed. But he was really smart. He heard that bears don’t eat dead people, so he pretended to be dead. The grizzly bear smelled him and left to hunt someone else. Mark was in safe hands and really lucky.
1st Runner-up Raazia 5B
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly when they just finished setting up the cameras and props when the bear they had been waiting for arrived! They all screamed in excitement! But the bear heard them and started moving towards them …
There wad dead silence. It was so quiet that you could hear a pin drop. They didn’t know what to do. All of a sudden, Mark suggested to pretend they’re dead, the bear growled right after he said that so they didn’t seem so keen about it! They all started running towards the opposite direction when the bear started growling! But what they didn’t know was that the bear was very lazy. Once Mark and his friends ran at least 2 miles, the bear found some fish in their bags they had left and started to eat some fish!
Mark and his friends had ran until Germany and they never saw the bear again!
2nd Runner-up Dannawin 5A
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly they saw a bear. The bear came towards to them. They were really frightened. They tried to chase it away but the bear was still there. They were really scared so they ran away.
The bear was really big, it has sharp claws, big fangs and has thick brown fur. It was actually quite cute but scary too.
The bear didn’t attack them. The bear was actually kind. The bear was just curious. The bear was really kind. Then Mark and his friends were not scared anymore. They patted the bear. The bear played with them and they took pictures of the bear and posted it on the magazine. They wrote the kindest bear in the world. They were really glad that they met that bear.
Champion Coral 6A
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly there was a fierce bear heading right towards them when they were trying to take a selfie. “Photo bombed by a bear?” asked Mark. “It was my best smile tool.” replied Jared, one of his friends. The bear opened his mouth so wide that Mark and his friends ran away because they thought it was going to eat them.
Mark and his friends did one of the most idiotic things ever, run away. The bear chased them because it wanted another selfie. Mark stepped in a hole and fell. His wig fell off and flew across the sky. The bear wanted to get their attention so he danced through the sky and caught the wig. Unfortunately, the bear snapped his neck when landing. However, the bear still wanted that selfie so it did an awesome handstand while chewing the wig and watching the sky rain emojis. Mark and his friends thought it deserved a picture and captured the amazing shot and gave it earrings to make him shine like a diamond!
1st Runner-up Rico 6B
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly a brown bear appeared out of nowhere in the bushes. Mark and friends were terrified. They were running as fast as they could but the bear ran much faster. They ran faster but one of Mark’s friends fell and the bear was getting closer and closer. So they helped him up and continued running. Then Mark remembered he had a book about how to survive a bear attack. So they first climbed a tall tree and started reading the book to find out how to survive. But suddenly twenty bears just came and sliced down the tree with their big strong claws. The bears were chasing them! After more running, Mark neared a cliff. At the bottom of the cliff there were rocks and salt water with salt water crocodiles. In the end, the rangers saved Mark and his friends. But next time they won’t be lucky to be saved by the brave forest rangers.
2nd Runner-up Alvin 6A
Bear
Last weekend, Mark and his friends went to the forest to take pictures. They found a beautiful grassy spot and decided it was a good place to take pictures.
Suddenly they heard a sound that is like a dinosaur coming in the forest. They were curious what kind of animal making such horrible sound. So they followed where the sound was coming from. The sound disappeared like a thunder. Then Mark noticed that there was an enormous bear behind them when he was taking beautiful photos.
They started running but there was another bear in front of them. They didn’t know that they entered the bear’s territory. Luckily they found a cave and hid there. They saw the two bears fighting and the first bear they saw killed and ate the other bear. They were fighting because the first bear was hungry and he wanted to eat her cubs. She protected them and sacrificed her own life for her young ones. The cubs were in the cave where they were hiding.
They waited until the killer bear was gone. They quickly took the cubs with them and gave them to animals rescue centre so that they can be safe. They were glad that they saved the cubs!